Valentini's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hell's Uber Driver - Andre The Giant]

The art and animation was minimalistic but it was alright. Other than that my only criticism is that many people won't find this funny unless your a wrestling fan. I am though so I thought it was great

Looking forward to the next episode with Benoit

[Willie's Life - Hard Homework]

The art was pretty simplistic the animation was pretty limited and at 0:39 what the fuck is wrong with the eye if its done well the 3 glares can work but when it isn't (like when you did it) it looks appalling. The lip-syncing is incredibly untimed and inaccurate which isn't noticeable to any one who doesn't do animation but since I do it I notice it immediately. The voice acting is horrid and why does Willie sound exactly like Billy from "Billy and Mandy"? Bring something new to your cartoon just don't reuse.

You know these problems wouldn't matter if the writing and jokes were not so terrible but in this flash they are. If your going to write terribly and include bad jokes the animation and art should be somewhat decent. The only laughable thing in this entire cartoon is the arm fold at 1:53.

In conclusion get better voice actors, add more than 3 phonemes to your character library's don't do lazy art and animation if your not gonna put effort into writing and DONT continue use of the default color palette that comes with flash

I haven`t watched any of your other cartoons but if this is what most of them are like I hope never see them

Terrible.

DavisToons responds:

There's nothing wrong with having a simplistic art style, at 0:39 the eye was supposed to get bigger and more bloodshot, to create a sense of drama in his mood, willie doesn't sound like billy, its only your opinion that the jokes are terrible, just because you don't find it funny doesn't mean nobody will find it funny.

[Knock Knock]

Ha ha ha. This was really funny I almost chocked on my salad when he said go fuck yourseld. The art and animation was pretty good though

JewelzMiles responds:

Thanks Valentini! Ahaha sorry for you almost choking buddy!

[GwainSaga - Pilot]

The talking sound effects become annoying by the 3rd minute. The art and animation is really appealing, I love the art style.

[You smell Like fish]

The art was really good but the voice acting and story were cringeworthy and obnoxious.

[Bang]

Unreasonably long, this coudve been shortened. The art you actually drew was good